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Something in the quality of a star satisfies the human mind.
With a iconic twinkle,
People unite from all around.

Testing the constellations,
Hoping to step over a fallen star.
What is in a star?

The mysteries of in the night;
To think that some eyes never see-
But the Star Man’s does.

Reach out the arms;
Close your eyes,
So close to the heavens,
So close to the heavens.

Will they search forever?
The star's temporary substitute for heaven.
Hear claims that we are made as the same stuff as stars;
But only if stars are from dust.

We don’t need the light from the sun-
Send us the stars
©2006-2009 ~zoeytalks
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I actually like this one... hehe.. . just because its different.. sorry kristen n george for using stars so close from urs.. but i had inspiration, and u dont want anybody to get in the way of inspiration.. well...

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:iconprettyboy326:
WWWOOOOOOOWWWEEEEEE that so totally tops my star poem.....love ya zoey!
:iconzoeytalks:
haha yeah right.. but thanku

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Power and majesty, Praise to the King

Age does not diminish the disppointment in dropping the ice cream from the cone
:iconfarahrozhan:
digging the closing!!! :w00t:

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Swallow your pride. It's not fattening.
:iconkristenjoy:
Hear claims that we are made as the same stuff as stars;
But only if stars are from dust.

We don’t need the light from the sun-
Send us the stars

LOVE IT.
What are you talking about? I can't write about stars, not like you do anyway. This is fantastic.

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I am a part of all that I have met,
Yet all experience is an arch where through
Gleams that untravelled world whose margin fades
For ever and for ever when I move.
:iconzoeytalks:
oh thanku!.. but i meant from ur sadie.... made mention of the constellations.. thats what gave me the idea.. :D

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Power and majesty, Praise to the King

Age does not diminish the disppointment in dropping the ice cream from the cone
:iconzoeytalks:
oh shucks.. thanku!

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Power and majesty, Praise to the King

Age does not diminish the disppointment in dropping the ice cream from the cone
:iconfarahrozhan:
:bow: pleasure...!

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Swallow your pride. It's not fattening.
:iconpatientlove004:
it's so prdy!:-D very nice.

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::All of us have creativity in ourselves, we just have to find it:: ~Me
~PoeticPath =christians ~da-library
:iconzoeytalks:
thanksha

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'You believe that there is one God. Good! Even the demons believe that - and shudder' -James 2:19

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