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Today a promise is fervently made;
Tentatively throwing everything away
A devotion, she will now be restricted to You.

Everything for You

No more little clues underneath car seat covers,
No more blues mournfully written to 'lovers',
This heart is all Yours.

Wiser men have made the same decision,
I only want to fall in love with You.

No more tormented tears,
No more smothering fears.

A blessing with traditional downfalls,
But we needn't fear,
For the sky is still twinkling,
I am slowly discovering.

No more desolation,
No more imitations

This time I will vow
          I do .
©2006-2009 ~zoeytalks
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Author's Comments

i am content with this,
as usual comments are essential .

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:iconxgelidx:
oOoOoo you should be more then content with this!
:eyepopping: woooo this is Really good! I like it lots! :w00t!:

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Danielle.c.Davis
:icondarkpyrokitty:
That's sweet. :) It makes me happy, good job.

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graaar
:iconwabanunu:
wow...thats some powerful words right there!!! well done really :clap: thats a favourite for me!!! :+fav:

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well excuse me for trying, its not my fault if the monkey stole it, thats why i have amnesia...ARGH
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:iconzoeytalks:
oh im pleased. i love it when u like stuff.. hehe

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'As it seems to be accounted for, we will live gracefully and suddenly now. Goodnight.' - Anonymous
:iconzoeytalks:
oh gladness. i appreciate that .

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'As it seems to be accounted for, we will live gracefully and suddenly now. Goodnight.' - Anonymous
:iconzoeytalks:
oh thanku, i appreciate that!

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'As it seems to be accounted for, we will live gracefully and suddenly now. Goodnight.' - Anonymous
:icontigereyelover:
Very uplifting, you've certainy captured the subject well without, but without falling into the trap of being overly cynical. Keep it up.

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All matter is simply energy condensed to a slow vibration and we are, therefore, one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively. We create our own worlds, yet are shaped by our connections to one another, from our love to our hate. We are one.
:iconzoeytalks:
great.. thats probably the thing that i strive for..
yay

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'As it seems to be accounted for, we will live gracefully and suddenly now. Goodnight.' - Anonymous
:iconlamalalain:
Wow, very beautiful! It reflects such a Godly ambition, a true giving of ones self to Him.

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Creativity is more than just being different. Anybody can play weird--that's easy. What's hard is to be as simple as Bach. Making the simple complicated is commonplace--making the complicated simple, awesomely simple--that's creativity. -- Charles Mingus

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